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I can see blood, mud and soldiers running around like a headless chicken! It is just chaos out here! I can see planes and mortars and tanks! I see the worried faces on soldiers! I can see the dead bodies of my own men! Plus I am fine and I miss! I hope this message gets to you!
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I can hear the screams of soldiers, the sounds of flash bangs and homemade bombs. I can hear the thunder and the rain clapping.
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I can taste the food that my wife gave me from home and the delicious cake that was somehow still good and yummy shape! I thank you for giving me supplies and food!
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I can smell the dead bodies on the battlefield and the poison gas in the air. The smoke coming from broken down planes, tanks.
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I am feeling the rain on my hand and I can feel the mud on my face and my hands. I can feel my feel my intervention (sniper rifle) in my hand and my deagle (pistol) by my side and my my machete on my other side I am ready to battle!
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I feel worried but I feel like a champion that I have gotten this far into the war! I really thought I wasn’t going to survive! I
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I feel like I am going to make it! I think there is only a few days of war left and I really miss my wife and hopefully I will see her soon!
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It wasn't so hard because we did watch 2 videos about war and what it is like in the trench and I also watched some movies about war so it wasn't that hard.
Hi Benson
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ava from papakura-central.school.
I like how you said
I feel worried but I feel like a champion.
maybe next time you can present it as a we video.
From Ava.
Thank you Ava for commenting on my blog! Next time I will take it into consideration to make it into video? Plus I also like that line "I feel worried but I feel like a champion!" But It did make me think if I should put it in! Thanks for Commenting! Can you put your link in the post so I can look at your blog?
DeleteHi im Reagan from papakura central school i love your writing it is very descriptive and you used alot of punctuation so over all your work is very good so bye
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog! I really enjoyed making the piece of writing! It was so much fun to different emotions about one thing (Being In war). Maybe you can put your link in the comment so I can look at your blog! Thanks for commenting!
DeleteHi Benson this is Stevie-lee, This was a fantastic piece of work. I really like how you used so much detailed words.I think next time you could add a small little summary about how you think your parents would react if you were actually going to war.
ReplyDeleteBlog you later - Stevie-lee - http://wpsstevieleew.blogspot.co.nz